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Tib · 01-13-2005, 11:26 AM

Thanks a million, Jazz. Now I'm going to have to rewrite the part where Theo Garner gets shot in a bar.

Good chapter, nice surprises, and your dialogue (always tricky) is getting better and better.

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Tib All Star Reserve Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Paso Robles, CA Posts: 882	Thanks a million, Jazz. Now I'm going to have to rewrite the part where Theo Garner gets shot in a bar. Good chapter, nice surprises, and your dialogue (always tricky) is getting better and better.