Sorry Tib
But it's hard to keep things that have happened to Driscoll from happening here. You totally stole my Japan idea. We're even now
I've been trying to develop characters more through dialogue than anything else - I think that's how I got Dewberry's image done right. And while Vasser's a jerk, writing his dialogue and attitude is always the most fun. Speaking of Dewberry, he's not out of the story just yet!
Meanwhile, everyone will have to wait until Sunday for the next chapter (to drag the suspense out even more!) because I'll be out of town Friday and Saturday. But oh. . . the shock some of you will have over what happened! I've been working on this since the start of Jazz's Arizona job. . . so it's going to be BIG.
Till Sunday.