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Originally Posted by tysok
Second: The "second season" begins today in Major League as the playoffs get underway. The clubs vying for postseason supremacy in the Division Series are paired together in the following matchups: (this time it lists the matchups)
In the second one it should say "today in the Major League"
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Over the course of my 8 test seasons I kept finding errors like this one. I documented them all, found about 30 of them, but instead of putting them all here I went in and searched through the xml file for all the instances of
[%leaguename] and looked at them all.
A lot of them were fine. Examples of good ones:
Playing in his first Major League game.
Major League GMs...
I'm a Major League ballplayer...
A lot weren't. Examples of not good (since nothing is bad) ones:
Major League announces...
Scouting report on Major League...
Playoffs begin today for Major League...
There's two ways to fix a lot of these, add 'the' in front, so it's The Major League announces, Scouting report for the Major League, Playoffs begin today for the Major League...
or add baseball to the end, so it's Major League baseball announces, Scouting report for Major league baseball, Playoffs begin today for Major League baseball....
Some of them have to have 'the'.
I tried anything I could think of in my mind where it would be fine (like John's league, Bear league, anything silly league) but they just don't work no matter what league name is there. But at least one is border line, and I may have gotten slap happy and added one that was fine... it shouldn't be hard to decide what should be done to fix it and I'll leave that up to you.
Anyhow, here's the list... I just put the TEXT OBJECT ID number, any notes to the side is either 2 problems in one set, another error I noticed in that set, or a question whether wording makes sense or should be added. There's 192 occasions.
Code:
2582 866 1591 4127
1943 926 1598 4758
1271 931 115 4759
105 109 1415 4761
660 1605 1417 2873
661 1606 1418 2900
664 1607 1422 3006
104 1610 1423 3007
671 1611 1427 3008
672 1612 1428 3009
673 1616 1429 3010
674 1618 1430 4768
675 1619 1432 4946
676 1621 888 5001
678 111 889 5004
680 1454 891 4871
103 1463 117 919
703 1469 848 1790
704 1475 853 1173
705 1028 1369 1676
706 1031 2215 1514
707 1034 1490 1736
708 1035 3953 1744
847 1036 3972 2166
106 1038 4461 714
867 History???? 1039 4463 716
868 1040 3217 343
869 1044 3264 745
873 2nd one 1053 2741 749
875 1055 2766 750
876 1056 2779 2nd one 751
877 1061 2786 752
108 1062 3860 753
830 113 3882 757 scoutING report?
834 1388 3145 761
835 1390 2 of them 3466 342
836 1391 3467 726
837 1403 3468 729
838 1405 3469 731
339 114 3471 738
879 839 3472 740
1007 842 3473 415
1010 843 4110
119 844 4113
854 845 4115
855 846 4116
856 1004 4118
859 1005 season after year? 4120
861 1589 4122
863 1590 4125