6951
"he shows bunt...(nl)put pulls up and watches ball"
Should be "but pulls up"
6957
"squares to bunt...(nl)pulls it back...(nl)ball [%game balls+1 long](nl)he held up in time..."
Think you mean he pulled back in time, held up would be for a swing.
14102
14104
14105
"[%game catcher] throws down to first...(nl)it\'s in the dirt...(nl)[%game fielder2] can\'t pick it"
Don't know that this is a real problem, but most of these in this section reference [game firstbase] instead of [game fielder2]. As I read further it looks like this would come up fine the way it is though.
14107
"snaps a throw down to first...(nl)bad throw!(nl)It's in the dirt...(nl)[%game firstbase can't come up with it"
Looks like it's missing the end ] for [game firstbase]
12738
"know about that...(nl)the ump might\'ve missed that one!(nl)[%game strikes+1 long] "
Usually this reference would say "strike [game strikes...]"
12798
"[%game batter] tosses his helmut"
Helmet spelled wrong
In this section it says the Catcher appeals.... actually the catcher can only ask for an appeal. Really only the umpire appeals, and sometimes he refuses to appeal and makes his own call.
2365
"he has a [%pitching w]-[%pitching l] won-lost mark "
There's a bunch of these if this is a problem. Usually it's a won-loss mark instead of won-lost. Don't know that it really matters but...
2599
1204
1211
1218
"total appearances his lifetime won-loss record stands at [%pitching w word] and [%pitching l word]"
All these have the same "problem". Usually when it says won-loss record it doesn't have [word] in the brackers. Looks like this would say his won-loss record is 10 wins and 10 losses... repeating itself.
1182
1196
1197
1203
1208
1210
"so far this year with 30 saves out of "
All these list firm numbers instead of variables.
1205
"registered a [%pitching era] ERA and stuck out [%pitching k] in "
Should be struck instead of stuck
1212
1216
1217
"He has made [%pitching g] relief appearances "
Says relief appearances but calls for Games
1214
"In [%pitching g] appearances he has crafted a"
Just says appearances, but this is in that section of relievers so may be the same.
9987
"[%game pitcher] starts chirping at ump"
Should be chirps at
the ump... unless the umpires name is ump.
10003
"discussing it face mask-to-face mask "
Could be fine... just looks weird.
14157
"[%game inning order long], [%game outs long] outs, [%game balls] and [%game strikes] the count"
Usually I see Inning [game inning]. Seems this might say Second, two outs....
14357
14375
"nice cut-off by [%game fielder]..."
This section usually references [game fielder of]. Don't know if it's a problem though.