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"Good fielders are honored by the [%subleaguename] League: (nl)(nl)[%string]"
I don't usually see "League" after [subleaguename]
1435
"[%defenseaward] are the symbol for defensive"
Should it be [defenseaward
is the symbol? Or [defenseaward] plural.
1440
1441
"The elite glovemen in [%subleaguename] are: (nl)(nl)[%string]"
Should be
the [subleague]
1443
"obscure awards in baseball, [%defenseaward] was presented today to:"
Should be "
the [defenseaward]
4750
4751
"The [%subleaguename] finest defenders, the [%defenseaward] winners "
Should be poossessive [subleage]'s
4754
"backhand stop or an umbelievable over-the-shoulder catch"
Spelling, Unbelievable instead of umbelievable
4756
"honored at this year\'s annual SION sports awards banquet. [%defenseaward] will be presented to these top notch"
Should be "the [defenseaward]" or pluralize it.
4757
"The vast vaccum of space "
Spelling, vacuum instead of vaccum
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"[%subleaguename] Selects the Best of the Best Fielders--[%defenseaward] Award Winners Announced for this Season"
Should be "The [subleaguename]"
151
"[%subleagueabbr] Honors Players Outstanding Fielders: [%defenseaward] Awards Presented for this Year"
The [subleague] again.... also "Players" doesn't fit, unless you change fielders to fielding
12404
"and hestill came away with the ball"
Spelling, "he still" not hestill
12362
"AND MAKES THE CATCH!(nl)how about that, folks!"
Should be capital H in "how"
14257
"that\'s one for [%game fielder], who is on the move"/>"
The announcer should really know who's on the move, I'm not there to see it.
Maybe "He is on the move"
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14686
14687
"a few steps and Davis camps under it..."
Davis instead of variable - think this was already found, but might as well be thorough.
14301
"infield rule called"
Infield fly rule called
12213
"to [%game flyball depth]"
But to which field? "to shallow" or "to deep"
11855
"[%game pitcher] pops him up..."
Sounds like the pitcher has swung mightily and popped up the batter. Was he charging the mound?
12563
"[%game flyball location]...(nl)for a base hit(nl)[%game batter] pulls up at first"
What happened in flyball location? Almost looks like "hit the ball" will come first, but the rest of the objects in this area don't follow that pattern.
12609
"starts in...(nl)stops and start...(nl)and fields it on a high hop"
Letter missing, Stops and starts
13922
"no chance to catch it...(nl)it\'s lands five or six rows in."
It's lands five isn't quite right.
13923
"it a little pop fly right behind the plate"
It's a little pop...
14829
"Swinging a Hot Bat, [%personname L] Has Five Hits Against [%team#2nickname] Pitching"
Five instead of variable. I think this is the 5 hits in a game section, but even so, what if he had 6 hits?
14854
"[%personlink l] has [%batting h] en route to hitting for the cycle"
Should be got [hits] en route
14855
"He hit for the cycle, collecting a single, double, triple and home run."
Shouldn't these be variables?
14719
"[%teamplayer nolink] [%personname f l] "
Never seen [%teamplayer no link] called before... don't know if it's right or not but thought I'd mention it.
14889
"For [%team#1link nickname] starter [%personlink], that moment happened today when they threw a perfect game against [%team#2link]"
Unless the pitcher is the king of England, it should be "when he threw a perfect"
14890
"[%pitching k] [%team#2link] hitters struck out against [%personlink l] who showed some of the best control of their career"
Another king.
Should be "control of his career"
14897
"[%personlink] was unhittable and unforgetable today. "
Spelling, unforgettable
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"[%personlink] discovered that when he launched three longballs into the stands during the course of a one game against the [%team#2link nickname]. "
Should drop "a" or "one", "during the course of one (or a) game"
4833
"The [%team#1link] [%playerposition] was red hot, the ball just exploding off his bat all day long. "
Should be exploded?
4837
"launching three pitches over the wall giving him a total of 14 home runs on the season"
14 instead of variable
4838
"against [%team#2link] today ensuring himself of at least one day of fame in this young career"
Shouldn't it be "in his young career"?
4840
"No creaky bones in the veteran [%personlink], demonstrating he still has what it takes to get attention rocketing three balls out of the park "
Being nitpicky here, but it doesn't read right. Should be a period instead of comma, and start new with Demonstrating, and "he rocketed" instead of rocketing. So it would be:
"No creaky bones in the veteran [personlink]. Demonstrating he stiall has what it takes to get attention, he rocketed three balls out of the park..."
4841
"It doesn\'t happen very often, but when it does you want write down the name"
You want to write
it down
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"[%personname L] Breks Out with Career-Defining Barrage; Smacks 3 Dingers"
Markmeister beat me to the misspelling, but it should also be "a Career defining"