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Originally Posted by Raidergoo
For reference, (nl) is the code for new line.
. . .and I bet tysok could tell you how many times that shows up.
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I lost count when it entered the 8 digit numbers.
Another list.. because RBL must not sleep!
2211
"the most recent recipient of [%subleaguename] Player of the Week "
the [subleaguename]
4408
"Today, he corraled the [%subleaguename] Player of the Week "
Spelling, corralled
4410
"finished the week with a[%pitching era] "
Should there be a space, "a [era]"
4428
"[%personname L] rang up [%pitching k word] batters on strikes "
Should be just [pitching k] right, this would say "rang up 20 Ks batters on strikes"?
2091
"Magnificient on the Mound"
Spelling, magnificent
2104
2105
"Annointed [%subleagueabbr] Player "
Spelling, anointed
2398
"career [%personlink L] has picked up [%pitching w word] and [%pitching l word] with [%pitching s word] and a [%pitching era] ERA and recorded [%pitching k word]"
Too many "and"s... I'd change to "ERA, recording [piching k word]"
2404
"Lifetime he has a record of [%pitching w word] and [%pitching l word] and a [%pitching era] ERA."
"and"s again. [L word] with a [ERA]"
5299
"[%personlink L] has picked up [%pitching w word] and [%pitching l word] with [%pitching s word] and a [%pitching era] ERA and recorded [%pitching k word] "
"and"s again. "ERA, recording [k word]"
5338
5339
"With over 10 years in the league,"
There was one more like this, but had conditions listed under it. These don't, will they come up possibly for a guy that has only 3 years in the league?
1135
1136
"has sprinted in from the bullpen [%pitching g] times"
Saying RA but it's calling [G]
1142
"Season-to-date [%personlink L] has been called out of the bullpen [%pitching svo] times for save chances this season "
Redundancy, Season to date ... chances this season in the same sentence.
1143
5351
"innings with 30 saves out of [%pitching svo] chances. "
30 instead of a variable
1150
"In [%pitching svo word] he has gotten the win [%pitching s] times and blown [%pitching bs] of them"
Should be "he has gotten the save [s] times" Or "he has nailed down the win [s]"
1154
1158
"has made [%pitching ra] appearances and recorded [%pitching s word]"
Calls RA but just says (all) "appearances"
1154
1158
1162
1163
1166
1169
5365
5371
5374
5376
"He has collected 30 saves out of a possible 5 opportunities this season. In 31 total appearances, he has 221 strikeouts in 171 innings with a 4.74 ERA and [%pitching w word] and 5 losses."
This pitcher is crazy good... He's getting 6 saves every time he gets a chance!
Lots of variable problems
1164
"ERA and stuck out "
Spelling, struck
1166
"One of old men of the pen"
Should be "one of the old men"
1172
1173
"He has made [%pitching g] relief appearances "
Says relief appearances but calls for [games]
4846
"working total of [%pitching ip] innings"
Should be "working a total of"
4849
"and a [%pitching w]-[%pitching l] with [%pitching s word] in "
Doesn't tell me what those numbers are. Should be "and a [w]-[l] record"
4850
"has limited opposing batters to a [%pitching avg] batting percentage"
Technically correct I guess... just weird with batting percentage.
4856
"has recorded [%pitching w]-[%pitching l] record "
"given up [%pitching ha] basehits"
First: Should be "has recorded a [w]-[l] record"
Second: Should basehits be 2 words?
4857
"[%personlink L] record is [%pitching w]-[%pitching l]."
Should be [personlink]'s ... possessive
4861
"[%personlink L] has with [%pitching s word]."
Drop "with"
5365
5366
5378
"has made [%pitching g] appearances in tight game situations so far this season"
Talks about relief appearances, but calls [Games]