11043
"[%game secondbase] moves to his right(nl)scoops it up...(nl)shovels it over to first..."
If the 2B is moving to his right he won't be shoveling it to first.
11055
"out at first!(nl)[%game outs+1 long]down."
No space between "[outs long]" and "down"
11081
"flires to first..."
Spelling, fires
11099
"[%game secondbase] shoots it between first and second...(nl)but [%game secondbase] is there to make the easy play..."
Another fast player, he's hitting the ball and throwing himself out. I'd think he'd muff that play to up his hitting stats.
11110
"[%game batter] slaps a weak grasscutter the right "
Should be "grasscutter to the right"
11278
"make it a 4-6-3, if you're scoring along with us."
Should this be "mark it"? And should it say "double play" after?
11282
"to double up [%game batter]!score it second "
Spaces, [batter]!score
11283
"[%game batter] hits it on the right on the nose right at the "
Should be "hits it right on the nose at the" or "hits it right at the" or "hits it on the nose right at" ... everyone loves options, but what's there isn't right.
11286
"hard grounder right of [%game secondbase] at second."
Should be "to the right of"
11305
"and [%game shortstop] shoots it first to finish off "
"crushed right back to the second "
First: Should be "shoots it to first"
Second: The pitchers standing somewhere other than the mound again... do I need to get a ball and chain for this guy?
11306
"blazes it to [%game firstbase] to complete the twin kill..."
Should it be "twin killing"?
TEXT_OBJECT id="11135" text="bouncing to the left of [%game thirdbase] at third...(nl)he grabs it just inside the bag and spins...(nl)the throw to [%game firstbase] is(nl)in time for the out!"/>
TEXT_OBJECT id="11129" text="chopped to [%game thirdbase] just to the right of the bag at third...(nl)he throws to first...(nl)in time to get [%game batter] on 5-3 putout."/>
One of these is a foul ball. If they're talking the right of the bag is toward 1st base (like the right side of the infield) then 11135 is wrong. If they mean how the third baseman sees things then 11129 is wrong. But one of these
is wrong.
11181
"[%game outs+1 order long] out of the inning"
Should be "out in the inning"
11184
"[%game batter] hits high bouncer toward third...(nl)[%game thirdbase] fields it on the second hop.."
Should be "hits a high bouncer"
11186
"[%game thirdbase] takes on one hop.."
Should be "takes it on one hop"
11199
"and drill it to "
Should be "and drills it to"
14945
"[%game fielder] fires it to [%game firstbase]..."
Everything else in this category has [thirdbase] fielding the ball.
8369
8371
8375
"over to [%game secondbase] to get [%game firstbase]..."
The first baseman should really be waiting on the throw instead of pinch running for the baserunners.
8378
8429
"over to second for one...(nl)back to first for the double play"
The play didn't start at first, it can't go back there. Should be "over to first"
8388
"the throw to [%game firstbase] is...(nl)time for two.:"
Should be "in time for two"
8406
"[%game secondbase] makes the relay to [%game firstbase] is...(nl)in time to nail [%game batter]."
Should be "[secondbase]'s relay to [firstbase]" or drop the "is" behind [firstbase]
8413
"looping throw to second to get [%game base1]...(nl)relay to first in time to get [%game batter] by two steps."
On a 5-4-3 double play you never see a "looping throw"
8419
"big bouncer to third in the hole...(nl)good chance for two...(nl)[%game secondbase] moves quickly to his left..."
First, [secondbase] would be moving to his right. I also don't think he'd get there in time to turn 2.
Should be "[thirdbase]"
8426
"[%game thirdbase] moves in for easy ground ball...(nl)throws to [%game secondbase] and getsl [%game base1] for one..."
Should be "moves in for the easy"
Also just like there's no crying in baseball, there's no L in "gets".
7892
"hard throw to first to first..."
Drop one of the "to first"... maybe the first one.
7910
"takes a step to his right to grabs "
Should be "to grab"
7919
7922
"[%game outs+1 long] down, [%game inning order long]."
Needs "inning" after [inning order], or "in the" in front of it.
7920
"he gloves, tosses to first..."
Should be "he gloves it"
7930
7941
"rolled out to shortstop..."
Should just be "short". Shortstop refers to the person, or the position, not the location on the field.
7931
"[%game shortstop] gloves.."
Should be "gloves it"
7934
"saved nicely by [%game firstbase].(nl)(one) down."
"one" instead of variable
7943
"pitcher can't reach it..."
Should be "the pitcher" or "[pitcher]"
7955
"mark [%game batter] out 6-3 on your scorebook"
Should be "in your scorebook"
7957
"pounded right straight at the shortstop..."
Should drop "right" or "straight" Unless the announcer is overly dramatic.