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Old 06-08-2006, 05:21 PM   #109 (permalink)
tysok
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11210
"throws to [%game secondbase] forces out [%game base1]..."
Should be "throws to [second] to force out"

11226
11229
5818
5828
"make it 6-4-3 on your scorecard"
Personally, I think it should be "mark it" Doesn't make sense to "make it" since you're not making anything.

11234
"double up [%game batter]!score it short "
No space between "[batter]!" and "score"

11235
"[%game batter] hits it on the right on the nose right at the shortstop..."
Should be "hits it right on the nose at the ss" or "hits it on the nose right at the ss"

11235
11236
6027
6028 (but with move)
6033
5955
"make the easy toss "
Should be "makes the easy"

11240
11244
11250 (but with "fields")
5846 (but with fields)
"[%game shortstop] gloves, flips to second"
Should be "gloves it, flips"

11241
"he tosses to the second for one.."
Either "he tosses it to the second baseman" or "he tosses to second"

10053
10061
10066
10077
10078
"he snags it for the [%game outs+1 order] out of the inning"
Mostly, I don't think I've ever seen it this way, these say "[game outs+1 order long]"

10070
"right at [%game leftfield]...(nl)he polls in out number "
Spelling, pulls instead of polls

10077 (mentioned with the [outs order long] problem above)
10078 (mentioned with the [outs order long] problem above)
10086
10089
10099
6006
5906
5912
5913
"pulls it in for the [%game outs+1 order long] of the inning."
These need "out" behind [outs]

10126
"poped up to left field"
Spelling, popped

10133
"and squeezes it for out number [%game outs+1 long word]."
Doesn't need [word] since "out number" is there. This looks to say "for out number 2 outs"

5417
"here is flyball to center...(nl)[%game leftfield] circles under it..."
Should be "here is a fly ball"
Also this category is the center fielder catching the ball.

6007
"[%game centerfield] has an easy play(nl)heamps under it..."
Should be "he camps under it"

5418
"he hits a routine flyball to right...(nl)the left fielder goes for it.."
That left fielder is either really fast or he's playing out of position.

5900
5927
"reels it in for the [%game outs+1 long word]."
Should be [outs order], this looks to say "reels it in for the two outs"

5936
"[%game rightfield] catches up and reels it in.."
Doesn't read clearly. It should say he's chasing it if it wants to say he catches up.

5795
"steps on first base make the putout unassisted"
Should be "steps on first base to make"

5803
"[%game firstbase] corrals and touches the bag it for out number"
Should drop "it"

5814
5816
5825
"and easily outraces [%game batter] to first"
These are "outraces" or "outsprints". I care for either of them personally, I've never heard it, I'd make them "beats"... but at least they need to be split into 2 words.

5819
"line shot right back to the first baseman..."
That pitcher is roaming again. Should drop "back"

5822
"and he tags tag the base"
Drop "tag"

5837
"[%game outs+1 long] away in the [%game teamab] [fifth]."
Tried to get the variable it looks like, [fifth] instead though.

5840
"[%game firstbase] grabs it, tags the bag to retire [%game firstbase]"
Isn't the tie supposed to go to the runner?
Second [firstbase] should be [batter]
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