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Old 06-08-2006, 08:45 PM   #111 (permalink)
tysok
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I'm feeling lonely today. I think I may have the ultimate in back to back posts.

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To make this a tad easier, on me... you should search for "stuckout" I have a lot of these errors. Obviously, should be "struck out".

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"has a lifetime record of [%pitching w word] and [%pitching l word] "
"has a won-lost record of [%pitching w] wins and [%pitching l] losses "
Bunches of these too in this section. Shouldn't have [word] (or mention what they are) since what these numbers represent is already given.

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"losses with [%pitching k word] in [%pitching ip] innings with a career [%pitching era] ERA"
Quite a few of these too. Too many "with"s. Should change to "innings and a career"

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"He has started [%pitching gs word], "
Don't need [word] since the reference is already there.

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"with [%pitching gs] and an ERA "
No reference to what [gs] is

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"has compiled a ERA of [%pitching era] "
Should be "compiled an ERA"

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"has logged [%pitching k] career strikeouts.r stats, "
No idea what "r stats," is doing at the end.

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"Lifetime his overall stats shows the "
Should be "overall stats show"

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"opposing hitters have compiled a [%pitching avg] against him"
No reference to what [avg] is

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"[%pitching k word] and [%pitching era] ERA."
Should be "and a [era]"

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"Tis season the [%personage]-year-old [%personlink l] has won"
First, should be "this season"
But, this category is talking about career numbers.

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"career [%personname l] has numbered [%pitching w]-[%pitching l] mark"
Should be "has numbered a [w]"

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"walked [%pitching bb] and put up a [%pitching avg] ERA with "
Says ERA but calls [avg]

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"In all during his career in [%pitching gs] starts, "
Should drop "in all" and start with "During his career, in"
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