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Originally Posted by wrestlerjrh
This is amazing Tib, I have read every chapter you have posted several times and have been impatiently waiting for more. You are certainly better than many writers I have read. One comment though, you have the name change player (Otis Pahrik or something like that) explained twice with two different names that he started with, is this two different players in an amazing coincidence or is that a mistake? (chapter 42 part 2 and then again in chapter 46_
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You're absolutely right, wrestlejrh. I didn't catch that I had already written about Otis once and did it again. That's why I need an editor!
The second explanation is the one you should pay attention to. I'll have to delete the other one somehow. It can be tough to keep facts straight when your writing time is so broken up.
Thanks for the comment.