Just a couple of things I noted when looking through my beloved Indians...but overall, I think you nailed it pretty much spot on...!
Ryan Garko - He's got close to 400 major league at bats now (a bit of a small sample size, I'll admit), and he's hitting .290-.360-.467. with a real good minor league track record. His actual ratings aren't really way off, given that OOTP projects him at .266-.341-.445, but the problem is that he has almost no room for improvements in his potential rating. Given that he's still adjusting to ML pitching and is only 26 YO, I think it would be nice to see his potential bumped up just a little bit, to get him the chance to get in the neighborhood of a .280, 25 HR a year guy.
Josh Barfield - Range of 98/250 at 2B seems a titch low. After watching the guy this year, he's definetely got above average range. He's not the second coming of Robbie Alomar...but he sure is a nice, solid defensive 2B.
Kelly Shoppach - He's currently hitting .382-.455-.676 and OOTP's only projecting him to be...oh, who am I kidding. We all know this can't possibly last with Kelly.
Victor Martinez - He's spot on in most categories, except that his projected average of .287 is a bit off his career .302 average (he's also got a bit more doubles power than the ratings would indicate...he's averaged about 35 doubles per 550 ABs for his career). Also, his throwing arm rating is a bit generous...he's only thrown out 23% of runners for his career, so his arm should probably be bumped down a few notches.
Joe Borowski should be listed as the closer, Betancourt in MR (in the setup role).
I didn't really go through everything with a fine-toothed comb...but really, things look pretty much in order here. Can't wait to start playing when I get home from work!