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Jamee999 · 01-13-2008, 10:36 AM

Just re-reading it, you know, as you do. Spotted this:

CHAPTER 5:
Theo
March 15, 2003
Theo Garner came this morning. We were sitting in the locker room, Latino guys black guys and white guys.

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Should be this:

CHAPTER 5:
Theo
March 15, 2003
Theo Garner came this morning. We were sitting in the locker room, Latino guys, black guys and white guys.

Looking forward to the next installment

01-13-2008, 10:36 AM	#721 (permalink)
Jamee999 Minors (Double A) Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 118	Just re-reading it, you know, as you do. Spotted this: CHAPTER 5: Theo March 15, 2003 Theo Garner came this morning. We were sitting in the locker room, Latino guys black guys and white guys. --- Should be this: CHAPTER 5: Theo March 15, 2003 Theo Garner came this morning. We were sitting in the locker room, Latino guys, black guys and white guys. Looking forward to the next installment __________________ Jeter... To Rodriguez... To Martinez... Double Play!