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Old 07-10-2008, 09:58 PM   #171 (permalink)
Kuttner
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A few more. I apologize if these have been reported... I'm beginning to lose track a bit

TYPE: News
SUBJECT: Team wins Championship
2nd paragraph: "We had a lot of things going for us, offense and defense doing it at the right time. That's what it takes win a...."
Should have a "to" in there.

TYPE: News
SUBJECT: Team Chills Player's Hit Streak
1st paragraph: ...to put an end the right fielder's 20-game hitting streak.
Should have a "to" in there.

TYPE: News
SUBJECT: Player Shows Off, Hits for Cycle
1st paragraph: Fenway Park is listed. (I have no Fenway Park in my league.) And ends with "victory over the Team city name only" Should remove the "the" or include the nickname of the team as well.

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