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Originally Posted by Kuttner
A few more. I apologize if these have been reported... I'm beginning to lose track a bit 
TYPE: News
SUBJECT: Team wins Championship
2nd paragraph: "We had a lot of things going for us, offense and defense doing it at the right time. That's what it takes win a...."
Should have a "to" in there.
TYPE: News
SUBJECT: Team Chills Player's Hit Streak
1st paragraph: ...to put an end the right fielder's 20-game hitting streak.
Should have a "to" in there.
TYPE: News
SUBJECT: Player Shows Off, Hits for Cycle
1st paragraph: Fenway Park is listed. (I have no Fenway Park in my league.) And ends with "victory over the Team city name only" Should remove the "the" or include the nickname of the team as well.
Thanks! Keep up the great work! |
Thanks for your help.
It would really be helpful if you would post the
first sentence of the story that has the error, then give the sentence that is wrong.
That way I can just read the first sentence of each and find the problem story much easier and quicker.
Fixed all of them except the Cycle story.
But I will go through all of them until I find the error.