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Originally Posted by Matter2003
I just had a guy get 5 hits but my team lost the game...PBP is as follows:
"Moreno got the accolades today, and the Fort Worth Cats walked off the field with a 8-4 win."
the and should be replaced with but---if Moreno had 5 hits and my team won, then the above sentence would be perfectly fine. Reading it when his team loses, just doesn't make much sense, and would sound much better replaced by but...
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Fixed.
"but" is better.
Thanks for posting the error.
I also noticed the story did not say which team Moreno played for. I added it in.