Quote:
Originally Posted by injury log
Apologies if these aren't useful; I haven't checked for line numbers in the xml file, and I haven't been keeping track of version changes, so maybe these have been fixed already. Hopefully they're easy enough to locate with a search:
-in one of the injury stories (for a season ender), the text "The [team name] [position] received [injury description]" appears, which just doesn't read well - this can end up saying "The Cardinals shortstop received a fractured fibula..." The verb 'received' should be replaced with 'suffered' or 'sustained'. In case it helps to locate the story, it later says "Club officials told BNN they did not expect him to return to the team this season." (and 'did' here should probably be replaced with 'do', since otherwise it implies either that the club officials have since changed their minds, or that the player has already returned, contrary to the expectations of the officials).
-there are (at least) two typos in the text scouting reports: 'reliver' should be 'reliever', and 'non-existant' should be 'non-existent'.
|
Thanks for posting the errors.
I will track them down and fix.
(EDIT) Found them. They are fixed.