AZT, I just spent the best part of 2 days reading Zarzour's story from beginning to end - it's a very classy piece of work, my friend! I have no idea why I missed this in the first place, but I got into it whilst filling in a little time before the emergence of OOTPX and, I must say, it ranks right up there with Big Six's "Pat O'Farrell" dynasty - there can be no higher praise! I really like the characterisation and the variety of "voices" you use in telling the story. I was concerned when Andrew was introduced to "Victor", but he hasn't been mentioned since then - I hope you don't have a nasty surprise up your sleeve for us! Now, of course, as well as waiting patiently for the previously mentioned OOTPX, I am also waiting patiently for Andrew Zarzour's next start.