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Kelric · 06-05-2009, 04:01 PM

into short center...
trouble for Sizemore...
but won't get it...
it falls in for a hit.

Should be 'but he won't get it...' IMO. Even better might be 'and he won't get...' since the trouble part is setting him up for failure and the next line only reinforces that. The word but makes it seem like he should have gotten it.

06-05-2009, 04:01 PM	#42 (permalink)
Kelric Hall Of Famer Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Greater Boston Area Posts: 3,982 Thanked 46x in 36 posts	into short center... trouble for Sizemore... but won't get it... it falls in for a hit. Should be 'but he won't get it...' IMO. Even better might be 'and he won't get...' since the trouble part is setting him up for failure and the next line only reinforces that. The word but makes it seem like he should have gotten it. __________________ Former Co-Commish and owner of the Boston Red Sox, 1783-1144, .609%, of the defunct Overlords Baseball League (1930-48). 17 Division wins, 9 ALCS wins, 5 World Series wins.