Originally Posted by Tib
You, who hate cliffhangers, want me to tease you some more and THEN drop the hook at the end of the paragraph?
Good suggestion, though. It does read a little more dramatically that way. And thanks for all the great comments, everyone. I'm hard at work on future chapters (I write about two hours a day), so if I get far enough ahead I'll post a chapter in mid-week. Probably not the next chapter, but maybe after that.
Ha, I don't really mind cliff hangers if it doesn't leave me hanging for weeks. As long as I can get to the meat during the same Paragraph I'm cool