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Jazzmosis · 08-09-2004, 03:32 AM

This is an excellent piece of writing... I was thoroughly impressed.. I don't even have ITP, but the character development and dialogue is beyond excellent. You have done what alot of writing can't do for me: Paint a vivid, unmistakeable picture of the scene.

Please don't stop. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

08-09-2004, 03:32 AM	#96 (permalink)
Jazzmosis All Star Reserve Join Date: May 2004 Location: The London you've never heard of Posts: 505 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0x in 0 posts	This is an excellent piece of writing... I was thoroughly impressed.. I don't even have ITP, but the character development and dialogue is beyond excellent. You have done what alot of writing can't do for me: Paint a vivid, unmistakeable picture of the scene. Please don't stop. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter. __________________ Florida Marlins GM, Netsports League - 2004 NL Champs, 2008 + 2013 Champions, 2004, 2009-2015, 2017-2021, 2024-2028 NLE Division Crown Mark Jazzington's Managerial Career - worth a read Thanks to Tib for the inspiration to write it.