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Old 08-09-2004, 03:32 AM   #96 (permalink)
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This is an excellent piece of writing... I was thoroughly impressed.. I don't even have ITP, but the character development and dialogue is beyond excellent. You have done what alot of writing can't do for me: Paint a vivid, unmistakeable picture of the scene.

Please don't stop. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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Thanks to Tib for the inspiration to write it.
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