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03-03-2013, 03:01 AM | #1 |
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Spelling, Grammar, and other Text Issues
Please post any spelling, grammar, and other text-related issues (strange characters, broken links, and so on) here. If the issue involves a news story, include the reference number displayed in its title (e.g. [35-252]) so RBLwebguy, who's in charge of those, can find it easily.
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Not exactly a "bug" but just an opinion on the wording of something..
I'm aware that it's still early enough in the process, but I'm really not a fan of the current trading report emails. This, just honestly doesn't sound very good: Quote:
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03-04-2013, 05:22 PM | #3 |
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Having not seen the Beta just yet I can agree with Habsfan there. The original does seem a bit clunky. For your solution, Habsfan, I'd drop the following:
"that had been rumored for a few weeks now." and "from the Montreal Canadiens" Otherwise it seems to be a pretty good improvement. What I like when reading transfer stories is the inclusion of the players age and their current key stats (8gp, 4 goals, +1 etc etc) so maybe there is place for that too. |
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03-04-2013, 07:57 PM | #5 |
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A few i've noticed.
1 - One the emails when you load up which team you want to be, so I was Dinamo Riga it say's "THE DINAMO RIGA" announce ect. 2 - on the available staff screen, when you click to view staff profile, beneath their name it says their age, and job but its in white text on a white background |
03-04-2013, 08:14 PM | #6 |
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Scouting screen for a player - STRENGHT should be STRENGTH.
I feel like you guys are going to get a LOT of these...
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03-04-2013, 08:15 PM | #7 |
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One thing I did notice is when you go to the "manager news" screen, right before the message there is a group of numbers in brackets i.e. [212-442]. Is this a new feature of some sort? I do not remember seeing them in OOTP 13 when I played it...
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03-04-2013, 08:19 PM | #8 |
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[5-242] #ERROR: TEXT CATEGORY::get_text() didn't find a text object for category 4
This error appeared in my inbox when news came through of me having signed a UFA. The subject heading had no problem [5-242] Chicago Signed Elijah Carson! |
03-04-2013, 08:22 PM | #9 |
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The debug code is likely on for easy access to fixing bugs.
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03-04-2013, 08:29 PM | #10 |
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Another minor grammatical error:
[123-332] ...best goalie *in* the team Should be *on* |
03-04-2013, 08:29 PM | #11 |
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Penalties.csv
Also, there appears to be no penalties listed for:
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03-04-2013, 08:30 PM | #12 |
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Sort of a text error:
Player Profile showing LAST 4 years actually lists the FIRST 4 years of his career.
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03-04-2013, 08:38 PM | #13 |
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I received the same error when signing a player from the OHL to the ECHL
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03-04-2013, 08:38 PM | #14 |
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When browsing the Available staff, you see guys that have "standart" for "standard" I would assume. Also, in the player card, the STRENGTH is spelled wrong. It's spelled STRENGHT
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03-04-2013, 08:42 PM | #15 |
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Penalty in the second period of in a game showing a time of 0:00. Is that technically possible? Might not be an actual issue, but just found it odd.
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03-04-2013, 08:43 PM | #16 |
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Am I the only one bothered by the over abundance of exclamation points? I would think that punctuation shouldn't be used in headlines and in play by play in game.
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03-04-2013, 08:56 PM | #17 | |
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03-04-2013, 09:04 PM | #18 |
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When doing a trade, in the trade info screen:
"Tampa Bays current total payroll is $64,849,024 and as rumor has it a budget of $70,730,000." Bays should be Bay's. Also the sentence sounds weird in my opinion and I think "as" is part of the problem. For what it's worth, I'd recommend: Tampa Bay's current total payroll is $64,849,024 and they are rumored to have a budget of $70,730,000. |
03-04-2013, 09:08 PM | #19 |
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Bit of a glitch. |
03-04-2013, 09:28 PM | #20 |
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Manager Home > Clipboard on the left > "Offseason in the National Hockey League" note:
Current line: "Or you should consider initiate a trade, ..." My recommendation: "Or you could consider initiating a trade, ..." Manager Home > Clipboard on the left > "Available players on the trade block" note: Current line: "There are the following interesting players on the trading block." My recommendation: "The following notable players are currently on the trade block:" |
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