First attempt making jerseys, need feedback

[skyballer455]

I first tried to post these in the Retro Style Logos and Uniforms, but got no feedback or response.



As the title suggests, this is my first attempt at making jerseys. These were inspired by a request for away jerseys for a Kentucky Athletics team.

I'd like to find out out how I can improve.

Thanks!

[Ike348]

Originally Posted by skyballer455

I first tried to post these in the Retro Style Logos and Uniforms, but got no feedback or response.







As the title suggests, this is my first attempt at making jerseys. These were inspired by a request for away jerseys for a Kentucky Athletics team.



I'd like to find out out how I can improve.



Thanks!

I like these, but all of the green is making my eyes hurt.

I would suggest using the short sleeves template and making the undershirt black, or maybe add a sleeve stripe or something. It's definitely a good start, though.

EDIT: I personally like the second one better.